Sorry but this shot doesnt really work for me (the expression makes me giggle though because all I can think of is contipation). Think this was a really good idea but perhaps the context of the shot could have been better (perhaps in a bedroom rather than outside by a wall)
This is cute and her eyes are closed, so I guess that's the closing?? Focus is good, your whites are blown, though. Cropping out the top of her head seems a bit painful. The backlight on her hair is really nice. I bet if you have filtered the sun (?) with a drape, the lighting would have been perfect with no blown whites and her forehead very smoothly lit.