It's the same scene, but not the same angle, sharpness, color, field of view, tide, time of day, etc etc. I don't think this fits the challenge well. I didn't submit to this challenge because what I had of two totally different scenes wasn't identical to the original by a couple of minor points. Maybe I should have submitted anyway.
I like the colour and the stillness of the original. This has its own identity. On its own it would do well...but in a Deja Vu Challenge where you are meant to emulate.....I think this should have been taken more like the original...as much as possible anyway.
Nice angle that provides interesting lines for the eye to follow in the composition. B & W tones are good and you have a nice dynamic range in your composition. The main suggestion I have is that you need better sharpness in that 'bridge'. It is too blurred for the viewer to appreciate the details like we see in the building. I can't tell if it is due to you focusing on the building while moving causing the blur on the bridge or if you need to increase the DOF by using a smaller aperture of (8 or above) so that both foreground and background are in sharp detail.
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