I was trying to get the mood of the motive. I isolated the important details by setting the aperture at 4,0. the daylight is my preferred light source, and I think it worked out nicely . what do you think???
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thanks everyone for the good critique, I believe I have learned something from this thanks to your wisdom. I first made some home-calibrating of my monitor... then i bought a new one!that was needed ;)
I wish this had less of a snap-shot feel to it. I think the composition goes well with the challenge - it just lacks a wow factor for me. I wish I could be more descriptive and specific.
Title and idea are good. Nice low angle, too. I think this needs a bit more moodiness, though. Maybe B&W or a filtered subdued tone? My monitor is calibrated and the whites looks a little blown, too. Hope you take these as helpful comments.