A really good attempt, but you have too much of the top of the shoe showing. The original had a low enough angle that I had to look twice to realize it was a shoe.
I think you nailed emulating the original with your composition. The B&W tones are very dynamic and leap off the page. The shoe & hands really emerge from the darkness of your black background to show us this 'silent' scream. Great job!
close to the original and almost as good, POV is slightly higher, laces are thinner, that'd make it hard to see the face if one doesn't know the original. PUMA logo distracts a bit, that area could have been darkened more
Clear shot, great lighting. However, I think the original worked so well because although you can see it's a shoe, most of the shoe is obscured because of the angle.
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