allright, well just in case anyone else stops in here and was wondering what i was trying to do.. i will explain myself.
the image is of me holding the key, the shadow of me holding the key and the reflection.. i cropped it tight so just the key is left.. and obviously i cropped it TOO much.. so that most peopel could not tell what i was doing. I liked that i was able to capture a relection as well as a shadow, and presented all three keys and me in a abstract, stylistic way.
Well, you obviously mis-read the challenge details.
I kind of get your point, what with the reflection and the shadow, but it never stood a chance, really, did it?
Your lack of entry of comments doesn't help my task here, as I have nothing to go an as regards your intentions.
Presuming you were trying to shoot what you have shot, then the main issue is quality: there is little or no detail in this photo. A lot of noise in the red, which is itself a muted version of the colour.
Beyond which i've no idea what to say to be constructive about this ...
As an abstract, then I simply don't like it - which is fair enough, I suppose. It doesn't work on any level in which I find interest. So I can't really critique it properly.
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