Imaginative - score on this alone. Am trying to think whether composing this in the conventional way (as a diner would see it sitting at a table) woudl improvide it. On reflection I like the alternative interpretation..!
The set up is there sure but what does it mean why should we the audience care to stare at a set up on a single image which seems very contribed for what reason its not clear. The lighting is a be harsh on the right side though and bluish. You may also think about your cropping again its a bit tight on the hammer head. I do love that its crisp and sharp well just keep working away kudos to you for now!
Nice idea, I would have liked to see how this woud have looked shot horizontally tho, and with a differrent background behind the placemat...maybe the floor of the garage
Vegitarian? Don't get me wrong but my mother always told me that the adjustable wrench always goes on the left. All kidding aside...very original and creative. Nicely done.
I think the image would have been stronger had you limited it to ONE allen wrench in the salad (or whatever) and used conventional silverware and so on. The title is good, but it doesn't match the image.
Cute idea and concept. I'm trying to figure out how to bring more attention to the composition on the plate. Maybe the hammer was too big for the photo, and you could of had a tighter crop on the plate without it. Just my opinion.
Oh what a wonderful idea. I really really like it, very creative, but i think it would be even better if everything was more infront of us, and was laid out as a landscape instead of portrait. 7.
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