I find the left edge of the photo a bit distracting with the black line against the blown-out white line of the phone. Also I'm not sure if it wouldn't be better closer or further away from the phone. What I mean is it's not close enough so that the image becomes more abstract (as soon as you see it you know you're looking closely at a phone) but it's also not far enough away that you could have filled frame with a strong shape of the phone.
Sorry to sound negative, I like it I just keep thinking it's not quite right though. |