Critique:
Topic (out of 4): Feel it's rather bland, yet still within the guidelines 2
Photo (out of 6): Focus seems to be lower lid? Like the colors though, 3
Just a suggestion here..if one has to take such a close up and a tight crop of the eye, i feel it would be better if the lashes were made up better and the liner did not smudge the lower eyelid
The mascara clumps don't help you on this one. The reflection on the eye is a bit strong (don't know what you can do about that - you're taking a picture of a rounded shiny surface). I like the different angle. This makes me feel like I'm watching someone and am almost an intruder in the moment. Nice focus, DOF, & lighting.