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The first thing I notice is that the crease isnt directly in the middle and so that gives a somewhat unbalanced feel. I can see you used the light off to the top right to get the shadow, but that has caused the lower left to be quite dark. The sharpness is good, and the idea works well and certainly meets the challenge. A suggested recomposition would be to move the light to the top of the book, balance up the crease, and place the glasses over both pages and have the shadow falling toward the bottom. |