Very nice. I wish the back of the pieces wouldn't melt into the background, but the composition and high-key approach are great for this photo. In my top 10 this week.
Don't like the framing of this shot. The use of negative space is not well warranted here in my opinion, or maybe the pieces are just too close to the bottom. Maybe the frame is the right size, I'd just rather see the pieces moved more toward the middle of the frame. Its a little too soft as well, it goes beyond my lack of focus comfort zone.
Awesome usage of negative space, focus and high key treatment! IMHO you are ever so slightly over exposed. You can not see the detail on the far edge of the puzzle pieces. This is still a very nicely done shot!
TC
oh man! this has great potential.. now.. hear me out.
the white on white is done beautifully, but I am looking for more DOF to see the puzzle piece that is toward the rear. A bit of too much highlight on the front piece making the back edge lose definition.
I really like it... don't get me wrong.
I think this was clever.
Nice idea, can't see if the do go together though because of the overexposure. But, the overexposure adds to the shot. Good use of negative space, a simple border may have had more effect though. 8
I love the simplicity of this shot! I think a better title would make me feel it a little more though. I would definitely consider buying a print of this, let me know if you make it available. Good luck!
Maybe it would be better if the puzzels would be in focus. This DOF does not fitt with this photo. But other then that it's a great picture ... give you 8
A wow on composition. Like the border - adds to the shot. I think I want to see the upper left edge of both pieces just a little bit. That said, great effect
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