Interesting abstract idea. The image looks a little blurry, especially the farther out of the image you look, I dont know if the filter was in use when you took the shot and that is the result of vibration/motion. The greyscale is also a little flat. Playing around with the brightness/contrast can add a little more depth to the tonal range of the black and white.
I like the idea, it's a good subject for a abstract photo, but there appears to be motion-blur, which has made things a but fuzzy. You could also increase the contrast a bit, as it is a bit grey.
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