Critique Club feedback:
Lighting held this shot back from working as well as it could have. The overexposure along the right side of the model doesn't play well with the shadows falling along the other side of her body. I read in your notes you didn't use any lighting gear,so you take what nature gives. Might have been worth waiting a bit later in the day.
Other than that, the shot is a pretty good 'babe on the beach' type of shot. I think the composition works well, the semi-nudity is usually expected in these shots, and the pose itself isn't bad. The model's facial expression could use some work, but I'm not tasked with giving her a critique so she's on her own ;).
Look forward to more of your work! |