Ummm, hmmm, hey Rudi! Looks like someone else must have logged into my account! I can't believe someone would leave such a comment. Ok, maybe now might be a good time to remind you that I faved this photo of yours a while back and still love it:
I'm afraid your title suggests more than what this photo delivers. While the technicals are pretty good it lacks character. The model has a blank look and the angle you've chosen is awkard. The model is certainly photogenic and I get the impression that there's a story here I just don't think you've captured that in this photograph. Just my opinion though. Good luck.
This being a fill the frame challenge, had you cropped even tighter in from the right hand side I would have given you a perfect score. Wonderful lighting and clarity. Professionaly done portrait. Good luck in the challenge.