Critique Club feedback -
The lading lines work well to draw the eye towards the model, though the model is very dark and hard to distinguish in the scene. Very pleasing contrast of the blues against the darkness. One thing that knocks the shot down a bit is the bands in the sky - looks like the processing got a bit heavy on the blues and the smooth transition of tones was lost.
Overall, the lighting is very tough to deal with here without using something artifical (remote flash near the girl jumps to mind immediately), so it was a difficult scene to work with. Overall, I think you made something nice out of it.
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