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08/26/2007 03:43:47 PMPost actions
the seagull on top is great but the extra wing really doesn't work for me
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08/26/2007 01:27:44 PMPost actions
Single lower wing detracts slightly from your image- perhaps a tighter crop on the whole bird.
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08/23/2007 12:52:04 PMPost actions
I find the wing in the bottom of the frame to be really distracting.
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08/23/2007 11:18:11 AMPost actions
I like the top gull, but the wing coming into the frame is a bit much for me.
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08/23/2007 01:00:04 AMPost actions
Hmm....I find the bottom wing a distraction. I wonder what it would look like with it cropped out.
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08/22/2007 10:04:45 PMPost actions
Nice shot. too bad the wing in the bottom of the frame. Takes away from a good exposure.
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08/22/2007 02:35:54 AMPost actions
It would be better if the lower bird's left wing weren't in the frame
08/21/2007 06:45:47 PMPost actions
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08/21/2007 04:08:06 PMPost actions
I love the bird at the top but not the wing of the second bird. Maybe if you'd cloned or cropped out the odd wing
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08/20/2007 04:36:33 PMPost actions
Cropping was invented for photos like this :)
Good light and sharpness though.
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08/20/2007 03:25:08 PMPost actions
The disconnected wing at the bottom is a little odd. Otherwise, it's quite nice.
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08/20/2007 02:52:31 PMPost actions
Beautiful, but I wonder if it would be better with just the bird above--the portion of a wing below seems to detract.
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08/20/2007 12:46:40 PMPost actions
I would have cropped out the single wing.
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08/20/2007 12:22:28 PMPost actions
I find the wing at the bottom a little distracting, I like the top gull though. You caught some nice lighting on his tail feathers!
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08/20/2007 11:30:51 AMPost actions
Great color and sharpness. I find the wing sticking up from the bottom a little odd...kind of distracting.
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08/20/2007 09:34:30 AMPost actions
why do you cropped the second seagull? Too bad; could be a very nice pic!
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08/20/2007 08:08:40 AMPost actions
a shame of that one wing at the bottom.
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08/20/2007 12:37:02 AMPost actions
I think this may have been a little better if you had just focused on one bird, instead of including the extra wing. I'm not sure the extra wing adds anything here.
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