While I feel that the dark area at the front of the picture is intentional, it is a little too softly focused for my personal taste. Cropping so that the grass area was your negative space may have been as effective. karmat
I was thinking this is awful simple. But, as I look more, I feel the space between the foreground wall, and the incinerator implies a fear of the incinerator, and I like the effect it has on me as a viewer. 7.5 -> 8
I like the concept of this photo but the fence is distracting and the incinerator feels like it is too much in the corner of the photo to be the main subject. rcrawford
I see the negative space here and the effort to capture it, but I'm still looking for a subject in the image... I don't see any particular point of interest to capture my attention... - jmsetzler