The building with the pyramid top is not parallel to the side of the photo (nor is the light post. I think this would have more impact if the main feature vertical was parallel to the side, and the other lines as they fit. Still, this is a nice shot.
almost has an optical illusion feel to it...leaning right,was that on purpose? Oblio (of Harry Nilssons' "The Point") works there,thats the way they wanted it...thats the way its going to stay... i like it
Having the picture skewed a little clockwise detracts, I think, from an otherwise succesful compostion. The dark triangle in the upper right hand corner is also distracting. Perhaps you could have set up just a bit more to your left?
Needs some straightening I think. I am not sure what to think of the black triangle jutting into the frame in the top right. The lamp post also seems to somewhat blend in so I am left sort of wondering what it is. A bit more contrast would add a bit of punch to the sky which already looks pretty good. Interesting subject and the title suits it well.
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