Technicals: The lighting is nice. The focus appears to be on. You will notice that you had to choose between a level horizon and vertical buildings. You went buildings, which is probably the right answer. Sometimes perspective correction can let you do both.
The feel: The clouds add appeal in the background. I think the shot feels cramped. I don't know what is to the left and right there in Perth, but I think I want to let those buildings breathe.
The game: Not bad. If anything, I would have tried to spot a time with even more dramatic light. It's certainly not bad here, but I'm sure you could squeeze a little more "wow" out of this shot. |