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composition could be chosen differently. the spoon is cropped, the bench is not parrallel to the picture frame, the shadow in the spoon could have been removed(turning the spoon or with reflectors). the 2 yellows don't harmonize, they seem to conflict with each other. Hand and spoon seem to have no relation to each other. I'm not really sure what you want to show. If you spend a little more time thinking through your picture and even sketch it out on a piece of paper before you shoot, you will realize what you want to show. |