Really quite wonderful, works excellently. I don't know what you would measure success by, probably how you yourself feel about it, but I guarantee tons of people would find this a striking and effective example of unsharp photography (two faves says so as well). As usual your frame/comp/crop and tonal range/bw is spot-on.
This one works too. I love how the hair is coming over the nose. Great crop of not only the face with the hair, but the whole image. I like the stark white background. Going to favs.