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While I like the serenity you captured here, I feel that I don't have a natural focal point in this image. The soft focus is applied uniformly across the field of view, rather than fading into the distance or foreground. The border also melds with the darker spots on the edges of the photo, making it less crisp. The tones of color you manged to convey are really nice, and there is alot of organic movement, but I'd work a bit more on the composition and aperture selection. |