The girls are dark and blurry, and the highlights are blown in the background. It would fare better without the guy in the picture and if the girls were in focus, in my opinion.
Interesting picture that tells a story. You can almost see the dialogue:
"Look at this yutz packing our stuff for us"
"I know...what a goof"
"He doesn't look that bad without a shirt on"
"Are you kidding?"
Lol..fiction is fun.
Really well controlled DOF that works perfectly for the picture. Good visual connection between the subjects. Some separation between them would help but kinda hard to do so while keeping this candid.
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