Though the shadow isn't too strong to allow detail to show clearly the light does fall most strongly on her upper torso - which pulls my focus away from her face to a less interesting part of the image.
I like composition and background.
I like the contrast of the shaded, pale face with the bright colorful background. You managed to get good detail in the face despite difficult lighting contitions. Whatever she is carrying on her shoulder is a bit distracting.
the focal point is the breasts, is that what you have intended? I would have thought it would be the face, then again I was wrong about the naked virgins, too
:-)