This scene has a lot of distractors for me. The sillhouettes are out of balance and become places for my eyes to roam. The sky has a fair share of noise in it. Overall the dark area in the lows right corner throws it all out of whack.
If this was shot at a different vantage point to get the colors of the sky without the sun overpowering everything I think you would like the results better. 5 |