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okay, so i should have used the B&W, straight one obviously! (in my portfolio)
This is my daughter and her boyfriend, i told them i wanted passion...this was their interpretation.
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provocative and maybe the cool tone is intentional, but I would have scored higher if it was warmer, would have "heated" up the emotion. It seems like the color is unnatural on her hair...but I like the composition a lot.
The color seems a little flat - which may be what you were going for, but maybe it should be more convincingly so. I might have gone all the way to B/W with this one.
Still, very much filled with emotion, and very much faceless. 7!
Nice concept, but something just doesn't hold right here. Maybe the male model appears to being smothered. I would assume his head to be more sideways, than nose in cleavage. The muted colours feel flat to me.
There are a few things here. The tilted horizon- while I like some things taken at an angle, this isn't one of them. The coloring- would prefer it in black and white because it just seems so washed out here- which could have been your intention, but doesn't do it for me.
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