I'm not that person, and I do appreciate everyones opinions. Being new at his whole challenge thing, I welcome all comments. Didn't do so well with this one.
It reminds me of this recent challenge photo - . If it's the same photographer, could you please find the time to check our comments as helpful? Thanks, good luck with the challenge: not a bad job with a back-lit subject.
Over exposed and I don't see the "rythm" in it. This shot had great potential but you should have chosen a different angle to keep the extremely bright sun out of the frame. It is impossible to get a correct exposure when there is so much contrast in one shot.
Not sure if the choice of exposure was conscious here, but the hot spot in the upper right is pretty hard to get past. May as well have just jumped all the way in and gone for a complete silhouette of the girl (foregoing all detail on her) to bring the highlights of the scene undercontrol. If even possible. I think this might have just been an impossibly lit scene.