Your light is a little harsh, deepening the shadows under her eyes. Maybe if you'd waited until the sun went down a little bit more, and softened the light.
Lighting is a little harsh on the side of her face. Considering, you did a good job of showing detail on the far side. Shadow around her sunny side eye is distracting. Good luck in the challenge.
pretty natural smile. I'm not really liking the lighting though, esp how it falls on her nose. Might have worked better with her in the light a little more, or not as harsh light.
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