It was between this picture and this //my.opera.com/SaphireIo/albums/showpic.dml?album=70647&picture=4614119 picture, both taken in natural light at sunset, and both straight from camera (aside from cropping), which may work against me since this is an Advanced Editing challenge, but I don't really like the overly-neatimaged look. So,here goes...
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I would guess that you have upped the colour temperature in a RAW conversion (although I may be completely off the mark). Any way, I am not entirely convinced by the colour of this - it seems just too orange, rather than giving a pleasing sun-kissed look. The inclusion of the headphones seems somewhat out of place.
She looks jaundiced. Bringing down the reds and increasing the blues in the highlights would've given this a bit wider color range while keeping that sunset light in tack.
The headphones are an unnecessary distraction, unless of course this is an advert.
awesome model, great pose, awesome light, way to fill the frame! Did i mention awesome model? My only complaints are that (1) the image is just a tad soft and (2) i'm not sure the headphones do much for me. 8 from me anyway