Looks like a good photo, but hard to judge when it's this small. I'm guessing this was a mistake, but if not then just be advised that your DPC score will always suffer if you make your image significantly smaller than 640 pixels, no matter how good the original.
Although a nice photo from what I can tell, wish it were larger. You have a shadow (looks like PP) behind the couple and it is much more evident behind the guy. Coloring looks a tad off, too. All in all this is not a bad photograph, but it might help to try reworking this just a touch. Your lighting and your model pose is very nice. (Maybe have him move his left arm down?) Keep it up. There is definitely potential in your work!!
Excellent. The only thing I would change would be the size..the size is too small. Love the overall photo..great lighting and the clarity is right on key