This would be a nice portrait without the other set of eyes. What is the purpose and what is is suppose to say about her? For me it says nothing. Perhaps if the eyes were done better and there was a bit of context... like for example... She is a girl that got made fun of for having glasses, so perhaps she is looking at her glasses and thinking of her herself as this "four eyed girl", possibly have an out of focus group of peers in the back as the "bullies".
The dof is nice, the skin tones could use some tweaking. |