From the title I guess that you were trying to recreate the feel of a vintage photo. In terms of that aim this photo doesn't work for me - the colour caste is more pinkish than sepia and the clear modernity of the model doesn't match the style. As a portrait in terms of this challenge it has both pluses ad minuses: other than what I have already said, the soft focus on the face combined with the sharp focus on the ear-rings seems wrong, however I do like the composition,and also the stare of the model.
It just looks like you were trying to hard and doing too much with the editing. Too many filters, not enough detail. One eye is a little off. On top of that it doesn't seem to really be in focus.
I hope this was taken in the submission dates, (ha ha) This image has an interesting look, even though it looks a bit OOF, it fits in a weird way, good work, 6.
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