Taken during the SF Bay Area get together at McClure's Beach in Point Reyes National Seashore. Thanks to [user]Crazystripesss[/user] for sitting in as my model!
I love the midst in the background. Nice lighting too. My only complaint is that she doesn't look naturally posed or even comfortable. Other than that, cool idea.
The first thing I notice is the centred composition, so you can't see much of the nice beach, but I guess that's the point. They are missing the scenery. I like that you just see the top of their head, buried in the paper. It just lacks a little punch. A slight S-curve in the levels would help to pop it out, or whatever editing methods you are comfortable with.
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