Don't know how you did this, but the scene is well thought of. Only the bee and the paper plane are the main subjects here. The bee is hard to discover from the background which is taking up way too much attention. Focus should only be on the bee and (partially) on the paper plane. The background would better be blur in this case. But that would probably make it an impossible shot.
Pretty funny, but the bee needs to be brighter because I didn't get what the title meant at first. Plus, in considering composition, the bright yellows would match nicely. I realize this was probably (sorry if I'm wrong) just lucky timing, but the focus is misleading. I look at the plane, then the plants, then find the bee and the humor.
cool photo! must have been difficult to setup and focus.
the flowers in the background are to busy, I would have used something simpler.
the composition is also pretty bad, maybe cropped to much.
the airplane, which seems to be the main focus of the pic, is to big to have out of focus, it just doesn't flow well in this picture.
if you were to have had the whole plane and be in focus, left a little more room around the two subjects and used a different background this could have done very very well. I hope that helped?
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