This is a lovely photo. I think catching the lghit from behind her instead of in front had a reverse effect. Your model appears to have some Very gorgeous eyes, wish you could have the light there to bring them out more. Still a great photo.
haha!
Originally posted by kawhona:
The backlighting on the hair is interesting but, the shadow on the face makes it not work for me.
hurhurhur!
Originally posted by jkkerr:
needs a bit of fill
hark. forgive them father, for they no not what they do.
The play of light on your model's hair is gorgeous, and I do lie the composition very much. I am less keen on the seeming colour caste on the model's face.
I really like this portrait, it's got a fresh and interesting feel to it. I just wish there was more light on the face I think, maybe by way of a reflector?
This is a lovely photo. I think catching the lghit from behind her instead of in front had a reverse effect. Your model appears to have some Very gorgeous eyes, wish you could have the light there to bring them out more. Still a great photo.