The raking light brings out the wrinkles in the paper. Were you really trying to emphasise that? Perhaps more front-on lighting would give a better look for this image.
the focus is off, image is a bit to dark, and I wouldn't have left the paper so wrinkly at the nice of the largest swan, maybe cloned or dodged it away as best as possible. it also seems cropped a bit to close to the edges. cool stuff though!