i know i didn't do great, but i'm very happy for my first challenge entry. i'd like to thank everyone who left feedback. i will try to use the info to improve. thank you.
I'm not sure that the grain really helps this. The lens flare is also distracting IMO. Just an inch or two would have made a big difference in this by having the youth move forward, or the photographer move left. JMO of course. Good luck in the challenge.
I like the composition of this picture a lot. However the colors in this shot are all "blah-ed" together. There needs to be more distinction between the model and the background. You get an 6.
i like the expression it is wonderful, but im afraid with the image quality you are going to lose a lot of points, it is just so hazy and grainy with the light part being almost a solid color.
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