Since this was a low light condition, you probably had to set a slow shutter speed. Try using a tripod, or if you don't have one, rest the camera on a level and sturdy surface. This will bring your subject into better focus.
I think the composition of this would have been improved dramatically had you place the subject lower in the frame and not tried to capture the reflection. that is just my opinion though. It is just really blurry and hard to distinguish details. karmat
The focus on the main subjects needs to be sharper - the blurriness is bothering my eyes just a little. Is the "softer focus" deliberate for a romantic feeling?
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background5, Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing4, Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4, Total Averaged Rating4. Autool If you had shot this with a tripod or some type of camers support I could have rated it much higher. It looks both underexposed and blured from camera movement.
Composition - good Technical Aspects - fair Meets Challenge - yes Visual Impact / Originality – fair Other suggestions – looks under exposed, except for the candle, and a tad blurred A 4 Jim msp
Conceptually, this is a very good photo... i wish the image quality was better. i believe this shot probalby needed a tripod to stabilize the camera. Camera shake causes this effect. photographing in darker places with no flash causes the camer to use a longer shutter speed and any minor vibrations in the camera can cause blur like this... - jmsetzler
great idea, especially with the reflection being the focal point of your photo, unfortunately, everything seems out of focus, there's nothing my eyes can rest on. -- gr8photos.