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Not enough contrast. Perhaps try to work on achieving black blacks and white whites in each image in order to achieve the range that you want and need to make the image more interesting.
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oh no, poor allie! this is my worst nightmare...nicely done!
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great idea but I think the execution lets it down slightly. I think a tighter crop and more clarity on the bed and child would improve it.
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I would try to level this more to the natural horizon, and have the model under the covers looking as if she is truly in bed.
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Poor Alli! I think it would be more realistic if she were under the covers curled up and looking like she were asleep. Now it looks too much like a staged photo. If there were a bit more light on her it would be better too.
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Allie in the bed would of been better than on the bed
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the shadow is pretty spooky, but this could really use with a little more contrast - it seem too grey
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YOU LEAVE ALLIE ALONE YOU BASTARD!!! /6
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