Greetings from the critique club!
Great moment you captured here. I see that there are some commenters that didn't tie this to the challenge which explains why you received a low score. (Most thought of dream as in what you do while you are asleep I guess).
As one commenter indicated there is a fair bit of noise here. I am not really sure why as you are using a fairly low ISO.
You did have a fairly wide aperture that caused some blurring. The other thing I would point out is that the focus seems to be on the mother's hand rather than on the baby's.
The conversion does work but I would adjust the levels to give it a bit more contrast as everything is rather gray with no blacks or whites at all.
Congratulations on your first grandchild by the way! |
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