I thought this was a good idea becouse this is like one of me worst nightmares.
In the beginning I was in that old abandoned house. I didn't know how I got there but I tried and tried to find a way out.
But when I was running around the house, trying to find a way out, it was always like someone were following me becouse
there were always so strange noises around me like someone talking to him self in the cellar or something falling on the floor. And when I was in one of the rooms I went out to look for a way out, and when I looked back everything were different like the bed were all messed up, the books who were on the floor were now on the table and more..
After a little running I ran in to the bathroom and went behind the door. I looked to the mirror so I could see out from the bathroom and then there stood the ghost watching me through the mirror, and I woke up.
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I'm not really getting a feeling of a haunted house as much as I am an old house. Perhaps if you had been able to incorporate a ghost type or things floating in the air it would be more convincing. I do like the color tones as they fit well for the feeling of an old house.
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