I love the concept. Very creative and imaginative. The photograph itself is quite unfocused and the focal point seems to be the texture of the middle of the finger. My suggestions for this image would be to (1) make sure the whole finger and fingernail is in the frame,(2) the focal point is the lens itself and is in crystal-clear focus and (3) a slight adjustment of light angle and/or source to reduce the hot spots .
Good title and nice take on POV. DOF seems a little shallow and it's a bit out of focus. Hot spots on tip of finger and again near the base of the finger are a distraction. Again, nice POV idea.
Too blurry!!! I know what you were trying to do with it, but it just doesn't work for me. If you want the viewer's vision to look distorted because of the contacts out - go for something that looks pretty blurry too. :) Nice shot.