WELL... being 12, my first thought would be "... where have I been?", then it would probably be something along the lines of "I can see that these girls' parents are very responsible!"
My first reaction is regarding the sorely misplaced focus! My secondary reaction is that the focus might be better where it is if those are transvestites.
Sloshball, a version of softball where you put a keg of beer at second base and must pound a beer before you can continue past second. Its fun, good times reminds of college days. :)
Second thought Grounded for not having the girls in focus.
Seriously, there is a conflict going on visually between the fence and the girls. The fence being tack sharp is winning the battle and the shot not getting the message across (not holding my attention very long). Perhaps if the girls were closer to the fence and less oof it would balance it out.