I like the black background and the well-lit, well-focussed fruit - the absence of any supporting structure for the fruit makes this all the more striking - great job!
The concept is good, but the result is not interesting enough to me. I think it would work better as 480*640; also, it's not quite centered, but so close that it WANTS to be. That makes it look like a mistake. I think if you want it to be off center it needs to be more obviously so. Back to the face itself, I think it is maybe the lack of pupils in the eyes that is bothering me. Not positive though. Good idea. 5, just-married
Great idea, excellent artistic merit, superb composition and a really good shot… Only gripe is with the lighting. Perhaps strong light would have pulled ot the colours out better... Small gripe I think, (9)