Your focus is a little too shallow. I don't know about the blown out white fuzziness on the left of the frame. Your black background has enough detail in it to be distracting. If you are gonna do a studio set up type shot like this you need to get all the details just right. After all you get to shoot it over and over again. It is digital! ;-)
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