I like the idea of the shot, however... the control panels seem to be the main focus.(maybe that was the idea)
My opinion is:
I would've maybe focused on a certain item and shot it along with the sky. Like cropping in more, or just getting closer to one thing. Or you could've just got closer shot of the panel. Try different points of view, try different depths of field.... Take several shots of an object to see what works best for you.
It seems a bit out of focus, but that could be due to the fact that it is so small. Don't be afraid to go bigger!
Keep up the good work and just have fun trying new things. That's how we get better!
First observation: This appears to be a simulator from the light coming in the windows. Second observation: This is too small. I can't see any detail.
TC
Don't crash! A very formal, direct view of this console that gives us a look into the complexity of it all. You might want to experiment with different points of view to increase the drama and interest, too.