My name is Melissa Prien. I was one of the individuals who wrote a comment on your collage girl image. In return you wrote to me and asked me when I was going to enter an image so you could return the critique. I have been doing a lot of shooting as of late and was wondering if you would turn your professional eye on a few of my images before I place them in a local Artist show. I am far from being a pro like yourself but I dont think I am all that bad so any thing you have to say about my images good or bad would be welcome.
I would've made the tower more central as more of a focal point in the composition. Good exposure and the smoke looks cool. Just needs a better focal point, especiially since it is so busy.
great scne. I like the smoke/steam blowing off the tops of the twin buildings on the left and the partial view of the elliptical roof in the lower right. Has a neat "Blade Runner" feel to it. 8
The exposure in this picture is a nice compromise between bringing out the glow of the lights and retaining the darkness of sky and buildings. Very nice.
Nice colors here, I like the composition and the effect of the longer shutter speed. One blown out spot with a red halo around in on the middle building at the top is rather distracting.
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