Very nice shot!
I like the motion used in the picture... the train and the people.
I think the picture is a bit too bright though. The lights on the top of the picture are a distraction. They catch my eye before anything else. Then my eyes see the light stripe on the bench.
I also would've like to see more people in focus. There are alot that are, but some could be just a bit crisper.
Not a bad shot overall - just some minor things I found. :)
the station buzzes with people and sound
as trains go whizzing by
stop for me and take me home
my request please don't deny
the people here are waiting
for the cars with electric feet
take us from this piercing cold
back home into the heat
Creative - like the blend of crisp and blurry people. Intesting lighting (except for the top most light - too hot and distracting) all in all a captivating pic.