Doesn't do much for me. The background is so unfocused that I sense it's just a picture of a fence, a pattern, no more, no less; no hint of what's really out of view, hence no point of view.
Nice attention to the rotation and cropping of the pic... I can tell you actually put some thought into it. :) Message also fits the challenge well and techinally it's good... although a little bit too small in size.