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06/25/2007 10:05:44 PMPost actions
He's a little overexposed imo. nice use of neg space though.
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06/24/2007 01:26:00 PMPost actions
the focus isn't too good.
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06/22/2007 10:23:41 PMPost actions
Perhaps if you cropped this a little tighter it would have more impact. Nice idea. Huge area of blue doesn't make the bird interesting (IMO) and I want to see him!
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06/22/2007 06:07:21 PMPost actions
i dont think the negative space bring out tension in this photo. its more dull.
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06/21/2007 09:47:33 PMPost actions
Not much NS here. It's all crowded into the lower left.
06/20/2007 03:12:49 PMPost actions
sharpening artifacts around the bird. So much space, so little bird. I think your effort to provide maximum negative space aloowed oyur composition to suffer a little.
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06/20/2007 12:11:41 PMPost actions
To make this work, the bird and the pole should be really sharp, else they do not attract the eye.
I found out that side-lighting early or late in the day is great for birds, it enhances their graceful shape.
Just my 2 cents, because I like your idea.
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06/20/2007 11:08:12 AMPost actions
A little more of the post, maybe an inch up on the sky would create a better effect IMO.
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