Your subject does make you want to look into the empty space to see what might be happening there. I like the background as well. Also curious about why he is dressed the way he is. Interesting photo!
the hot spot on his forehead and lack of sharpness in his eyes are what's holding this back ... love the composition and colors ... great idea for the challenge ... 6
I think this portrait is good. Great colors and detail. (I might have powdere his head first.) Not a fan of the border as it is. It detracts from an otherwise nice photograph.
Great background, composition and expression. Lighting is good for the most part, though perhaps a little harsh on his head. Overall a striking image. 8.